SCENE RX
$79 and you get…
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For up to 2000 words, I will use inline edits and comments touching on voice, word choice, grammar, sentence construction and scene structure.
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This PDF is a tool to use in understanding the edits and suggestions I have made, as well as guiding you on strengthening your own writing and editing skills.
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Personalized Editorial Letter addressing the strengths of your scene as well as where you could strengthen your skills. Included will be at least three Next Steps you can take to edit your scene.
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A simple guide for understanding the elements of scene structure. A tool for analyzing your own work in the future as well as help you structure your next scenes.
HOW IT WORKS
It’s so easy!
Just send me your scene of up to 2000 words, and within ten days, I will return your Scene RX package back to you.
Included will be: your scene with inline edits and comments embedded in the Word document, a personalized Editorial Letter and two PDF guidelines.

How you’ll feel
“When she went through my manuscript, I felt like I was getting feedback from both a professional editor and an enthusiastic reader at the same time.”
Robin Nemesszeghy, Author of Convergence Point
FAQs
How do I give you my scene?
Once you purchase the Scene RX Package, a form will pop up with a field for you to submit your scene. I will then on my end, copy and paste it into a Word document, and will email it back to you with the additional documents when I am finished.
What if I’m unsure if my manuscript is ready for a developmental edit or not?
No worries at all! I’m happy to review a few chapters and then discuss with you if the Draft RX program is a better fit for you. I’m here to help YOU out so which ever you feel is the better fit, I’m here for you!
Do i have to decide on the 1:1 coaching before I sign up for the draft rx program?
Nope! You can add it on after you get my analysis and we have our follow up meeting. You can decide to add it on at any point once I have read your manuscript and created your Revision Roadmap.
I’m not sure if I want to do scene RX or draft rx?
No worries at all! Just sign up for a meeting with me and we can discuss in person. Happy to talk through the options with you!
What exactly is the difference between the Draft rx program and a developmental edit?
A Developmental Edit is better for manuscripts that have already gone through a few author edits, where the Draft RX program is more for incomplete manuscripts or if you are lost. With a Developmental Edit, you will get inline comments throughout the entire document focusing on big picture issues. Each scene is analyzed to make sure that it’s doing its job for the novel as a whole. The Draft RX package focuses on the same big picture issues, but it does not include the scene level analysis or inline comments. Both receive Line Edits for the first 2000 words. Note: I do not do copy editing.
What if I have additional questions?
I’m always here to answer your questions! Feel free to email me at vdavis@revisionroadmap.com