Full manuscript evaluation & Revision plan
Revise Your romance
refine your story from meet-cute to HEA
REVISE YOUR ROMANCE is a full manuscript evaluation and revision plan package. No matter where you are in your writing journey, this package is designed for you to receive personalized feedback and a tailor-made agenda on how to clarify and strengthen your manuscript so you can confidently revise it into an unputdownable novel.
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I will critique how your manuscript flows from its setup to your happily ever after, breaking down which individual sections are effective and where improvements can strengthen your story. I will focus on your plot points, character arcs, antagonistic forces and pacing of your story.
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You will receive a personalized agenda prioritizing top structural concerns and highlighting the order in which your revisions should be done.
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You will receive a personalized step-by-step roadmap on how to turn your manuscript into a publishable novel.
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You can schedule a one-on-one virtual meeting with me up to one month after receiving your feedback to discuss your revisions or next steps.
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Optional Add-On
1:1 COACHING
Three months of high-touch coaching
Don’t want to revise alone? With one-on-one coaching, I will help you clarify your protagonist’s arc, conflict, romance, and pacing. Together, we will dive into your personalized agenda and refine your story so you feel confident in finishing and publishing your unputdownable novel.
PRICE: $1,800 USD
Price: $150 USD per 10,000 words.
Revise Your Romance is for all stages of writing. Whether you only have a partially finished draft or you have completed multiple edits, I will work closely with your story to help you turn it from good to great.
Although I will not be providing a developmental edit with inline comments, I will provide a detailed editorial letter addressing the novel's overall strengths and an agenda outlining the next steps to transform your novel into a story worthy of a fandom.
Stand out from the crowd by writing an unputdownable book.
Who the romance roadmap is perfect for
→ You want to strengthen your writing skills in the romance genre.
→ You want to write an unputdownable novel.
→ You love your story, but feel that something is missing.
→ You seek clarity with your structure and/or characters.
→ You have researched story structure, but now are overwhelmed with the amount of knowledge you have when it’s time to write.
→ You want a wing woman for your journey to help guide you to the finish line.
next steps
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I love to meet with all potential clients. During this 30-minute virtual meeting, we’ll discuss your goals, what your book is about and where you are feeling stuck. You will leave with your next steps to achieving your goals, with or without a decision to work with me.
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If you are submitting a scene or manuscript, we will discuss deadlines and follow-up calls. If you decide to coach with me, I’ll send you available meeting times to choose from, scheduling a consistent time to meet. Contract and payment are due with submission of material or before our first session.
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Email me at any time with questions about my process or working with me. I will happily get back to you within 48 hours.
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What I love in Romance
I love a good romance. That’s my only requirement when I read. I want it to grip me from the first page and steal me away from my crazy life to live an even crazier one.
My goal as a book coach is to help romance novelists write gripping books that keep their readers up all night.
I love to work on and read nearly all subgenres of romance. I love thrillers and cozies. I love a workplace alpha boss as much as a blue alien, or even better, an alien alpha boss who’s running from their omega mate.xI have worked on MM, MF, and MFM books and have read beyond.
I am not a very sensitive reader and can handle most triggers. And happy to talk through this with you!
My only focus is to get your characters to shine on the page and tell their stories in a way that will pull your readers in.
If you have any questions for me, I’m happy to answer them!
vdavis@revisionroadmap.com